Hi peoples! this is an Itachi x Sasuke spanking fic. I dunno if it's considered yaoi, because Itachi will be the one spanking Sasuke. hmm...
well, this takes place in the manga when Sasuke had killed itachi, finding out all the secrets, and now wants to attack konoha. And sasu gets a lil' visit from weasel-boy >:3 Okay, now on with the show! Err...Story! XD
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Held back crying was heard, for the sorrow of Sasuke's now deafited dead brother, Itachi. "I.... I... I will avenge you, Itachi..." said Sasuke, while team Hebi and Madara just listened. "For now on, our team 'Snake' will now be called team 'Raven', and starting from this point on... We will destroy Konoha."
And that was that. Team Raven and Akatsuki join forces, both their goals are set to destroy Konoha, the village Uchiha Itachi sacrificed himself for, which is now meaningless...
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"Sasuke..." Madara said, breaking Sasuke out of his thoughts. He looked to the old Uchiha, paying full attention. "... So, on with your first mission as an Akatsuki memeber...."
"..!" Sasuke looked at him, so did Karin, Juugo, & Suigetsu. "....."
Madara sighed. "You must go out and seek the 8th Jinchuuriki...." (A/N: I think all the demons are jinchuurikis, sorry not so sure o3o)
"...?" Sasuke blinked, he knew there had to be an 8th demon, but he wondered where it was, and what it's host and abilities it possed.
"The 8th Jinchuuriki is the 8 tailed Ox-beast demon. It's host is Killer-Bee, living in Iwagakure. It's special abilities.... Well, you can find that out on your own." Madara finsihed, dismissing everybody.
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"AAHHH!" Everyone yelled, KillerBee was strong! He had swung 8 swords at Suigetsu while he was using some sort of water jutsu. SLICE! Suigetsu was down.
"Shit!" Karin yelled, trying to save the water element boy, but Juugo wouldn't let her. "Juugo! Sasuke! We have to save Suigetsu!" she said while KillerBee disappeared.
"..." Sasuke looked at her. "...Forget about him for now, just use your chakra senses to fi-"
"But..." Karin broke in. Sasuke snarled at her. She sighed and used some type of jutsu to sense out KillerBee. "There he is.."
KillerBee was feet away and behind a boulder panting. "Oh come on! I can't have a break?" Sasuke glared at him, jumping infron of the host and used Amaterasu on him.
"GWAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!!!"
Sasuke stared at the horrible monster in shock. The Ox-Demon has appeared! "RAWR!!!!!! WHAT IS THIS?!?!?!" The Ox-Demon demanded.
"Right in time, Oxy! What we have here is the Akatsuki; here to capture us!" KillerBee laughed, the Ox just growled at him. "WHY WOULD YOU BE LAUGHING AT A TIME LIKE THIS?!"
Sasuke was broken out of his thoughts when Karin was sneaking over to rescue Suigetsu. When the Ox noticed her, he stomped over to her and whipped it's taat her and the water boy. 'oh no...' Sasuke thought when Juugo went into his maniac self to save his partners. Sasuke used Amaterasu on the demon, and had ended up deating the Ox Demon and KillerBee (so he thought).
Team Raven headed back to Akatsuki base, Sasuke decided to take a walk through the forest first. "I'll catch up to you guys later.." he said as he waved later.
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Sasuke was walking alone in the forest, thinking about destroying Konoha still. "Tch." he snarled, sitting down by a tree.
Sasuke had soon fallen alseep, and just the time, it was night. He had fallen into a deep sleep, dreaming.
While Sasuke had been asleep, a "certain someone" had came to visit him. This, "certain someone" for some reason was in the Akatsuki uniform, and had big, beautiful glistening Angelic wings. He had a hallo on his head, too. (A/N: I had always imagined that if someone had died form the Naruto world, they would be wearing rainbow colorish Kimono-Yukatas. Something like that :D) He had long dark-raven hair, his nails painted purple and had birthmarks from underneath his eyes.
No doubt about it. This "certain someone" was Itachi Uchiha.
Itachi looked over at the sleeping Sasuke, smirking. He had a feeling that Sasuke was going to do this, and now he needs to be punished. "Foolish little brother... Do you realize what you're causing...?" Sasuke was now in a light sleep. 'I can hear a familiar voice....Madara..? No... Naruto...? No... Sakura? Kakashi? No....!!"
Sasuke had been woken up when he felt himself being put over someone's lap, and realising he was on a cloud (but still on Earth in the forest). "Hey!! Let go!!!" The younger Uchiha snarled. "Foolish little brother; you realize you did a big no-no, right?" Sasuke gasped. He knew that voice! It was Itachi!
Sasuke immediately blushed when he felt his pants/skirt thing drop down along with his boxers. His butt-cheeks were pale and cute. It's such a shame that soon they'd be burning red.
Itachi had grown angry quieckly (he was already angry, now even more angry) and smacked Sasuke's butt.
"Ow!" Sasuke yelped, blushing more. "What the fuck do you think you're doing?!" Sasuke snarled, earning a harder spanking. SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! "OW!!!!" Sasuke yelped.
Itachi growled at him. SMACK!!! "I can't believe you said you'd destroy Konoha! I'm ashamed of you!" Itachi scolded -screamed- at him. "Danzou is one thing, but attac Konoha is unacceptable, young man! And this whole thing with Madara & Akatsuki- What was that? BIG NO-NO, MISTER!!!!!" SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK!! The spanking was fiercer then before.
All Itachi got as a response from Sasuke was, "Tch." That only made Itachi grow angrier and the spanking worse. "You just doubled your punishment, you naughty boy!"
Sasuke gulped and whimpered, his butt was burning and it was red. "Please, no it huuurts...." he whined.
Itachi ignored him and began to spank him even way harder then before.
SMACK!!!!
"No."
SMACK!!!
"And-"
SMACK!!!
"-you-"
SMACK!!!
"-wonder-"
SMACK!!!
"-why?"
SMACK!!!
Sasuke yelped everytime he was spanked, tears welling up in his eyes.
SMACK!!!!
"Because-"
SMACK!!!!
"-you-"
SMACK!!!!
"-have-"
SMACK!!!!
"-done-"
SMACK!!!!
"-the-"
SMACK!!!!
"-world's-"
SMACK!!!!
"-biggest-"
SMACK!!!!
"-NO_NO!!!!!!!!!" he screamed.
SMACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sasuke couldn't take it anymore; he was crying and whimpering from the spankings he received. Itachi felt a little bad, but knew Sasuke needed a punishment this bad. He looked down at his butt; it was a deep red-purple color.
Itachi already knew how hard he spanked, and didn't really regret it. Maybe only a little. Come to think of it, Yeah, he did feel bad since he just gave the world's most worst spanking to his most precious person, his little brother Sasuke. Itachi moved slightly and Sasuke jolted, trying to break out of his brother's grasp.
"No Nii-san! please stop, it hurts!" Sasuke whined and begged, crying more now.
Itachi shook his head and made Sasuke who was now sitting on his lap, look at him. They looked into each other's eyes and frowned.
"I-I'm sorry, Nii-san..." Sasuke sobbed and buried his face in his brother's neck.
Itachi held him close and rocked him back and forth, soothingly rubbing his back. "It's okay, it's okay; don't cry.." He soothed while Sasuke protested shaking his head and cryed more, thinking Itachi hated him now.
"I'm so sorry Itachi..."
Itachi frowned and made Sasuke look up at him again. "Sasuke...." He kissed his forehead. "I will always love you no matter what; Never forget that."
Sasuke smiled softly at that and shed some more jears, some out of joy. "Itachi... I love you."
Itachi smiled at this. "I love you too, Sasuke." He replied back, watching Sasuke fall right asleep.
When Sasuke had gone into a deep sleep, Itachi flew away carrying Sasuke on his back, to Konoha Hospital and let the village take care of the boy for now.
And right now; Itachi had flown up to Heaven...















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One thing... Can I give writing critique?? *writes too much fan fiction* Ermmm.... Just one thing... Whenever you switch speakers, start a new paragraph. ^_^ Makes it easier to read and is grmmatically correct.
Gomenasai!! >_< lolz
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~LogLove
Itachi
~cherubchan is reviving dead Sasuke fans.
I have the Uchihas tied up in my gallery. If you want 'em, come'n get 'em!
My epic fail ->[link]
Nani? writing critique? lol
oh okie that make sense cuz most of the time im not sure if to start a new paragraph ty lol
o3o lol?
XD
gomenasai... I'm pushy-know-it-all SOB.
Itachi/Sasuke: HAI! Watashiwa anataga DAIKIRAIDESUYO- ~AsterUchiha!!!
watashiwa anataga sukidesuyo!
lol
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~LogLove
Itachi
~cherubchan is reviving dead Sasuke fans.
I have the Uchihas tied up in my gallery. If you want 'em, come'n get 'em!
My epic fail ->[link]
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Fave pairs: HashiMada, HashiTobi, IzuTobi, IzuMada, ItaMada, HashiIzu, IzuHashi, DeiMada, ZetsuZetsu, ZetsuMada, PeinMada, KyuuMada, NaruSasu, NaruMada.
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~LogLove
Itachi
~cherubchan is reviving dead Sasuke fans.
I have the Uchihas tied up in my gallery. If you want 'em, come'n get 'em!
My epic fail ->[link]
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